At the Edge of
Actuality and Imagination: Gail Moran Slater’s Poetry
By Carl Blumenthal
On
the cover of Gail Moran Slater’s new book of poetry, At the Edge (Antrim
House, www.antrimhousebooks.com, paperback, $15.00,
also available from Amazon) is the oil painting, “Automat,” one of Edward
Hopper’s masterpieces depicting the loneliness and alienation of early modern
urban life.
Against
the inky backdrop of night as viewed through the diner’s window are the bright,
shiny surfaces of the automated diner and a colorfully dressed white woman, in
winter coat and hat, seated at a lone table with a coffee cup in her right
hand. Most striking is that while the hand cradling the cup is bare, her other
hand is gloved. In other words, the automat is a temporary way station on a
solitary and perhaps gloomy walk, from where and to where we can only
speculate.
Given
Hopper painted “Automat” in 1927, at the height of the pre-crash, roaring 20s, the
woman’s stylish hat and fur-trimmed coat suggest she is more likely an
upper-class “flapper” than a lower-class “street walker.” Hopper often used his
wife, artist Josephine Nivison, as a model, and, because he claimed that his
work wasn’t consciously about loneliness, it’s possible this character is
taking a break from some creative endeavor or contemplating her next move, if
she is not experiencing artistic block.
That’s
why I imagine Gail Moran Slater identifies with the “automaton” in the painting
for whom this diner might be a regular haunt. The woman might wish to purchase
a ready-made poem from one of the vending machines with a variety of food (for
thought), but with her eyes downcast and apparently in deep thought, she may
realize that creativity (after all, she is the central subject of a painting)
is no easy task.
Yet,
the automat may be more than just a lonely ship of dreams where one can pass
the night but actually a refuge, like poetry is from an otherwise prosaic reality.
Although the title of the book is taken from one line, “at the edge of tears,”
Moran’s poems suggest the poet is on the verge of numerous revelations or
epiphanies that tend to the ineffable. Her goal is to lead readers to the
proverbial water’s edge—there are several references to the shore—with such
tantalizing imagery that we will plunge deeply into the flotsam and jetsam of
our own lives.
Moran
references other paintings: Vermeer’s “Girl with a Pearl,” in her poem, “On the
Steps of the Met 1997,” Homer’s marine paintings, such as “Blue Boat,” and also
“Boys in a Pasture,” in “Winslow Homer Exhibition,” and Rembrandt’s late
self-portraits, in “After Viewing the Dutch Masters.”
Though
these paintings are as different from each other as they are from “Automat,”
each poem is representative, in order, of one of the three sections of the
book. In keeping with the spatial imagery of “At the Edge,” I would summarize
them as 1. Near and dear; 2. Far and away; and 3. Home bound. This structure
amounts to a satisfying thesis, antithesis, and synthesis.
“The
Edge of Tears” is the last poem in the collection, and, like “They are Present
by their Absence,” also from the third section, has this double-edged take on
love and loss: “Come with me to the edge of tears/ where candles gutter but
stay lit./ My head is bursting with flowers.”
At
the Edge contains
only 25 poems but each one paints a well-crafted picture, dare I say, of events
described in the poet’s voice or those dear to her who she quotes or paraphrases.
Thus, it’s not surprising that in her epigraph Moran quotes W.B. Yeats’ “The
Lake Isle of Innisfree:” “I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the
shore/…I hear it in the deep heart’s core.” What she promises us, if, like her,
we are brave enough to face our possibilities as well as our limitations, is
“one true moment of clarity” between the light and darkness of our lives (from
“After Viewing the Dutch Masters”).
In
a similar vein, “Consolation” is the first poem in section one, about a tree
laden with fruit that someone brought back from Hawaii and left on her porch.
The kinetic nature of the tree as it blows in a breeze is transformed through
vibrant simile and metaphor into the personality of this bearer of good
tidings: “The light between the leaves was you,/ restless with intelligence,/
quick wild/ stirring my heart at
the borders (my emphasis) of my splintered world.” Here again is a contrast
between love and loss, wholeness and division. Some of the other cutting edges
are estrangement, reconciliation, breakup, madness, death, war, peace, laughter,
and remembrance.
Her
simplest and most riveting poem, “Crossing the Distance,” comes at the end of
the first section:
My
sister takes in dogs of all shapes and sizes
but she does not take in me.
I
call to her but no sound I make
is
made of words that can cross the distance between us.
Last
night she was just a cutout on a hill,
a
pack of curs at her heels, the sky burning,
and
I knew she did not belong to me.
Given
that Moran has nothing but good feelings for and memories of the rest of her immediate family, including her ex-husband, the
edge she stands on here looms over a gorge of emotion. Even her way with words
cannot bridge it.
Another
little gem is “This Time of Night,” in the middle of the third section:
Under
the white coverlet, now as then,
the
sweeping tide of the sheets,
the
same cool turning, I dive, I tumble
toward dreams.
Memories
run wild. Night must have
released
all its prisoners—
my
ghosts are younger now.
I
love this time of night. My bed makes me
alert
to everything—the hours,
the
planes in flight, the faucet drip.
My
senses gleam like candles.
How
she can be at the edge of sleep and yet, acutely conscious is a paradox like
many others in the book. For instance, the rules of her dad and his chums’
card-playing were incomprehensible to her as a child, but she’s sure in
retrospect that “The Angel Gabriel/ could have dropped in/ and blown his
trumpet;/ the Second Coming/ could have come and gone./ They wouldn’t have
heard a thing.” (from “in memory of APM”)
I
have not referenced poem’s from the book’s second section, the shortest,
because, with the exception of her homage to W.B. Yeats, “A Kind of Madness,”
based on a sojourn in Ireland, they tug at my heart the least. Many of her
farthest trips were for writing workshops. However enlightening, perhaps she
preferred to be home at her writing desk, as in “Consolation.”
A
former teacher of English who now instructs immigrants in ESL, Gail Moran
Slater grew up in Boston and lives in Hingham on the South Shore, “a place mad
for poetry.” The three favorite poems she memorized are Dylan Thomas’ “Do Not
Go Gentle into the Good Night,” “One Art,” by Elizabeth Bishop, and Theodore
Roethke’s “The Waking.”
Read
these poems and you’ll understand why Slater loves to live on the cutting edge between
actuality and imagination.
(Formerly
a community organizer and urban planner, Carl Blumenthal is now a mental health
peer counselor and journalist. He used to live in Boston and the North Shore of
Massachusetts. Carl writes for Behavioral Health News, City Voices, a peer
mental health journal, Friends (Quaker) Journal, and the Brooklyn Daily Eagle
as well as his own www.brooklynsgotculture.blogspot.com.)